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Austria cellar case

A 73 year- old men imprisoned and abussed to his daughter, called Elisabeth Fritzl. She was repeatedly raped by her father during 24 years. But the most shocking situation is, that he is the father of her 6 children.

Austrian police is investigating if Josef Fritzl, girl`s father, is responsible for a murder of a girl called Martina Posch.

For that reason, this an impacting and horrible piece of news, that it is more incredible and unbelievable than a movie, isn´t it?

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A 73 year- old men imprisoned and abused to his daughter Elisabeth Fritzl. She was repeatedly raped by her father during 24 years. But the most shocking situation is, that he is the father of her 6 children.


Austrian police is investigating if Josef Fritzl, Elizabeth's father, is responsible for a murder of a girl called Martina Posch.


For all those events this is an impacting and horrible piece of news, which is more incredible and unbelievable than a movie, isn´t it?

You are what you read... Jorge's blog!

Jorge’s blog is an interesting website to visit if you want to read good stories and descriptions. Jorge has an attractive way of writing which allows you to imagine what’s he trying to say or what are his real purposes of his posts.

The background colour of the blog seems to me like a “Luis Vuitton” purse, but in general it is according to Jorge’s personality. It is not too much.

But I have to say that this blog at the first view didn’t catch my attention, but after a rapid reading of the topics I prefer not to be carried away by first impressions and keeping on reading.

The post that I like the most of this blog is the one which talks about Chiloé, because I chose the same place to talk about in my blog. When I read it I realize that it could complete my post. It has more descriptions and a good narration. I like it.

A piece of advice to Jorge is to try to decorate a little bit more his blog, maybe showing some pictures of himself or images to put in the empty spaces (in the left side of the blog) because it is centred in only one side.

In general terms I recommend you to visit Jorge’s blog, read his posts and give him your comments. http://simplereaders.blogspot.com/

Queen Elizabeth... Why not???

It was so difficult for me to think about a person I would like to meet, but I thought about my university needs. During our Civilization & Culture II course we have been studding about Queen Elizabeth I. I really don’t know too much about her, and actually I need to know more in order to carry out with my assessments.

A good moment to talk to her would be drinking tea in her castle. We will talk about her life, which was the most important events during her reign, why she decides to become the virgin queen, her life, her everything; all those things in her own words. May be I could give her some advices, in order to create a connection between England and Chile … why not? Maybe it would help us to be a developed country and to live in better conditions, and what is more interesting it would help us to speak English since birth… Well in those conditions we should think about studding another language like Portuguese or Nigerian.