domingo, 31 de agosto de 2008

Correcting some mistakes


While I was reading Andrea’s blog I could realize that she has a lot of interesting things to share. Her writing is attractive, but there are many mistakes that she definitely could improve after realizing about them. Her posts are characterized by spelling mistakes which are constantly repeated such as profetional instead of professional, or carrers instead of careers. There are a lot of punctuation mistakes and many long sentences. But the reader can understand almost everything she wants to say. Capital letters, wrong tense and word order are some others mistakes also.

Felipe’s posts are really good, but he definitely could improve them if he chooses the correct tense and change the word order. He use to write as he writes in Spanish, for example when he says: “Well, I find the English is very difficult for me”. Here he wants to say that he thinks that English is difficult for him. I think it is a current mistake on Chilean English learners. There are some sentences that I really couldn’t understand, such as “The big most classmate speaking to English good, my sister study English”. Finally the current mistakes that we can find in his writing are missing words, wrong tense and word order.

miércoles, 20 de agosto de 2008

Being helpful...


I really think that the idea of giving some feedback to other students is very challenging for us, especially for me. I like the idea of being helpful for somebody else... it makes me feel good.
We need to have this oportunity to find and correct other's mistakes, because we as future teachers will do it all the time with our own students.
I would like that at the end of this semester, the students from U. de chile could say that they improved a lot their writing in English and that we were very helpful for them.


sábado, 28 de junio de 2008

Blogs encourage us to write better


Nowadays blogs have become an important way of express ourselves in the internet. Here everybody can read your ideas, thoughts, feelings, etc., and give you a comment expressing agreement or disagreement. That idea of writing what you want and people reading it, is very challenging for students at school, because they can improve the way they write and the way they express their own ideas in their own words. But on the other hand I can say that sometimes blogs allow students to write in inappropriate way when they are not supervised by the teacher or parents.

Some students are not really confident when they have to express their thoughts and ideas orally, but they have the gift of communicate them in written words. Here blogs are the special tool which allows them to communicate what they want whenever they want. For example from my own experience I can say that I prefer to express myself by writing what I think, because there is not the pressure of being watched by other people or the feeling of saying something and not to be understood because you are nervous. When I write I feel more confident because I have the enough time to think and to organize my ideas. What we have beet doing in this course with blogs make me feel that I had improve my writing in English because we have the opportunity to write about interesting topics and to express what are our feelings or ideas of them focusing on our grammar mistakes or in our general mistakes.

One disadvantage of using blogs in the classroom is when students don’t follow the correct way of writing even though the have really good ideas. Some people use to write in the same way they speak, which is not very good in terms of communication in blogs. When you write in the same way you speak you let the reader understand what he/she wants because you are not clear with your writing and the words you use may be are not the correct ones. So, here the teacher is very important because he is the person in charged of the student’s writing, and he has to correct their mistakes as well as making sure that he understood and he is going to write correctly in the future.

In conclusion I can say that blogs are very useful to improve students writing. Blogs allow students to be confident while they are writing and make them feel that they can express their ideas clearly. We as future teachers will be responsible about our students’ writings, that is why now we have to improve more and more our way of write, and if blogs help us a lot now to do it, blogs will help our students a lot to improve themselves.

Oral Fixation


When I saw the album cover “Oral Fixation” of Shakira I immediately thought that it is really attractive. The first time I saw it was when I was looking for a gift for my mother’s birthday in “La Feria del Disco”, and then I decided that it will be the present for her. I like it because the main image let us think about many things, like Shakira as Eva from the Bible and the baby, an important subject in the image, as the new life. I really can’t say what it wants to mean, but I really like it. The colors and the position of the characters are very attractive for me. It really attracts you to look inside and may be to buy it.

Math is not for me!!


During my whole school time, I always felt that Math wasn’t for me. This subject is compulsory for everybody and everywhere, and even if go abroad to China I will find it. I couldn’t escape from it. I studied it for about 12 years at school, and when I entered at the university I find it here too. That was awful for me, I couldn’t believe it. Then I had to resign myself and to accept it anyway.

I didn’t like Math because I’m not very good with numbers and solving math problems, and I always had bad marks in this subject, I just don’t like it and my teachers didn’t help me a lot to understand because they were really bad.

I know that math is something which is present in our daily life, and even if I don’t like it I have to face it anyway.

jueves, 15 de mayo de 2008

Post Corrected

Austria cellar case


A 73 year- old men imprisoned and abussed to his daughter, called Elisabeth Fritzl. She was repeatedly raped by her father during 24 years. But the most shocking situation is, that he is the father of her 6 children.


Austrian police is investigating if Josef Fritzl, girl`s father, is responsible for a murder of a girl called Martina Posch.


For that reason, this an impacting and horrible piece of news, that it is more incredible and unbelievable than a movie, isn´t it?


The same news but with some corrections

A 73 year- old men imprisoned and abused
to his daughter Elisabeth Fritzl. She was repeatedly raped by her father during 24 years. But the most shocking situation is, that he is the father of her 6 children.


Austrian police is investigating if Josef Fritzl, Elizabeth's father, is responsible for a murder of a girl called Martina Posch.


For all those events this is an impacting and horrible piece of news, which is more incredible and unbelievable than a movie, isn´t it?

miércoles, 14 de mayo de 2008

You are what you read... Jorge's blog!

Jorge’s blog is an interesting website to visit if you want to read good stories and descriptions. Jorge has an attractive way of writing which allows you to imagine what’s he trying to say or what are his real purposes of his posts.

The background colour of the blog seems to me like a “Luis Vuitton” purse, but in general it is according to Jorge’s personality. It is not too much.

But I have to say that this blog at the first view didn’t catch my attention, but after a rapid reading of the topics I prefer not to be carried away by first impressions and keeping on reading.

The post that I like the most of this blog is the one which talks about Chiloé, because I chose the same place to talk about in my blog. When I read it I realize that it could complete my post. It has more descriptions and a good narration. I like it.

A piece of advice to Jorge is to try to decorate a little bit more his blog, maybe showing some pictures of himself or images to put in the empty spaces (in the left side of the blog) because it is centred in only one side.

In general terms I recommend you to visit Jorge’s blog, read his posts and give him your comments. http://simplereaders.blogspot.com/