miércoles, 1 de octubre de 2008

Corrections of Felipe's blog

Stonehenge

The monument of Stonehenge is a spotted dolomite which when newly quarried is a dark blue speckled whit brilliant (wwch) white stars of quartz (wo). Stonehenge it (sm) is believed that (wo) it (nn) was done into the(nn) Lourdes of(wp) prehistoric Europe.

that (c) the earliest (sm) has been dated to 7.000 BC and (mw)most recent …(sm) in medieval times suggesting (wf) that the site was already (ww) important 4.000 years before the oldest stone circle (p)

Stonehenge is a place very mythical (wo) (p) an example is in the times of Roman Empire,(p) they believed that Stonehenge was created to(nn) for a ritual important.(wo)

The last excavation at (wp) Stonehenge was in 1964 and the(ww) scientific found more evidence of (sm) ritual practice.

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