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Andrea's post correction

viernes 24 de octubre de 2008

For Javiera

Hi Javiera!
How are you doing (sm = ?)
Do you remember me? We met when I had to do a post about “Something about me”. In that blog (ww = post) I present (t = presented) and (ww = introduced) myself and I could talk about my family, my career ,my projects for the future, , (p) in brief I present (t = presented) and (ww = introduced) my life.
But now I want to know something about you.
I now that your name is Javiera and I now (nn) that you study English Pedagogy (p) but (nn) now I want to know about your life, your hobbies, your family, your projects for the future end (sp) why (sm= do) you study English.
Besides it (ww = that), I (sm) like to say (ww =know) to me (?) (I would like to know) what do you think about my English, because I think your corrections can (t) help me very much to learn English better, and for me (sm = it) is very important (sm = to) learn English very well.
So I hope you are very well and I will be waiting (sm = for) your post.
By (ww = bye)

Felipe's post correction

domingo 26 de octubre de 2008

A letter for to the Trainee Teacher

Hello Javiera, how are you?
Well, I think that the correction about my work in (wp = at) Laboratory in English (wo = English laboratory) is very good, (p) your help in my learning is very important. I have learned a lot for (wp=from) the corrections.
In another context you know a lot of me, because you read all my posts in my blog, (p) on the other hand I don’t know nothing about you. Well, tell me about you (ww = your) hobbies, activities and others things. Tell me about your experience in the role of teacher, your corrections in my posts and the posts by Andrea? (nn)
Also, I want to thank you, (p) for your correctionS, that has (t) helped me a lot,(p) I hope (sm) have learned about, the tenses and order of word (wo = word order).
In conclusion at this time, (p) I am learning a lot and (sm = I) hope that this job can be important to (wp= for) you. Well I hope in the future, your answers about for (?) you.