Corrections!

Correction of Felipe’s Blog

Correction - The Last Semester

I remember that I always like (T) The Beatles, in special the songs of Lennon and Harrison. Well, they have died. Lennon in 1980 was murdered (wo) for a fanatic (p) on the other hand Harrison died of cancer.

Harrison was less known for his music, but had many good songs. Between they (sm= famous songs are??) “While my guitar gently weeps”, “Golden slumbers” and “I Me Mine” this songs I like (wo).

However, Lennon was always an influential (ww= influence) in the Group. His songs were very good.

I would like it (nn) if, they were still alive, because I would like (sm=to) sing some song (f= some songS) with them and compose a theme. (Confused sentence= I would like, if they were still alive, to sing some songs with them and compose a theme).

I would like to ask Lennon, Why you went out of the band? To Harrison I would like to ask him, How was lived (f= was to live) a famous life in the past with the band?

I wish they were still alive (f), because the music in this time can (t=could) be very different and very good.

Speaking (ww) of other members of The Beatles such as Paul and Ringo, in the actuality (wws= nowadays) they are singers. Paul sings in (nn) around the world the songs of The Beatles and his songs (wo). Two year (f=yearS) ago he sang in the Grammy for first time. He sang the song “Let it be” (p) I like (t) (sm) see singing a (NN=so Spanish) Paul in the Grammy, because I remember the successful past of The Beatles.

I like this photography

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Well in this occasion, I (sm) speaking about of (nn) the photography that I like most.

This photography was taken in winter, in the (nn) Quintay town. In this time, I (ww) and my classmates were in this town for studies (f) the characteristic physical (wo) of the territory. The photograph shows me with Frodo, Jesus and Chilombiano. Well, we are doing a performance, (p) in this moment Frodo take (t) this tool that uses the fishermen (wo), and allegedly he us hit (wo=he hits us), and we were on the defensive. Well, this photo was taken for (f) the Napo that traveled with us.

I remember that this moment was very entertainment, because in the same afternoon to (nn) we chased a dog, (p) in addition, we traveled for a lot time on the coast.

The photograph I like for it is very nice (confused= I like the phot because it’s very nice), the landscape is beautiful, the sea and beach are wonderful, (p= period (punto seguido) in addition, we were very happy, and in resume this photo I like to mush (wo/?= I like too much this photo)

I would like travel to the this Country

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In this occasion I (sm= am) talking about the (nn) somewhere (?) country that I would like (sm=to) visit in the future.

Well this country is Nepal. This country I like for her traditions (wo) and the architecture of buildings. In addition, in the north of (sm) country is located the Tibet. The Tibet is a city of the Republic Popular China, but the people of this place (in the most Tibetan monks) think in the autonomy of the country.

In other context in this place is located the mountain most big (wo= biggest mountain) of the world, The Everest.

In addition, in Nepal her (f) (f= there are religions like) religions are Hinduism, Buddhism, Islam, Christianity, but in (nn) the tradition tell (f) that the Buda Shakyamuni was born in Lumbini, in the South of Nepal, for this reason Nepal is a place sacred (wo) for the Buddhism.

I would like (sm) travel to this country with friends, girlfriend or my family, (p) however I think that nothing I would accompany, but I would travel alone (?).

Well, if I travel to Nepal, (sm= I would) visit a lot places, such as the mountainS, the Buddhist temples in special the Bouddhanath. Also (sm) visit the Lumbini town, typical place of the Buddhism. The Bhaktapur City or the Devout City, this is a medieval city that (sm= is) located in at (just one prep) an altitude of 1.401 (it’s located at 1.401 mts of altitude).

Correction of Andrea’s Blog

My favourite country

Which country I like visited??? (?= which country I’d like to visit?) Mmmm...very complicate (t)...I would like to visit all (sm) world!!! But I think that is not possible because I don´t have money. The only possibility that I (sm) was (t) win the "Kino" but (sm) is not very probable bacuse (s) I don´t play the "Kino". Than (ww=then) I will (f) have to choose one country and that county is India. I love India and I don´t care if that is a very poor country because I think that is wealth is in their (f) culture. I like everything off their culture, their religion´s (f), their food...
I would like (sm) go with all my family because their (f=they) are loverS of other cultures in spetial (sp= especially) the culture that was very strange for occidental people, spetialy (sp) my father.
When I was (t) there I would like to visit all the religius (sp) temples and (sm) visit the Indo and Ganges river´s and dress myserlf (sp) whit tipical (sp) Indian (c) clothers (sp).
I don´t now why attract to me so much this country (wo), but I realy (sp) thing (sp= think) I was Indian in my pass (sp= past) life because I feel myself very close to this country, and I always like exotic things and exotic people much more than my own culture. Actually I thing (sp=think) that nowing (sp= knowing) other cultures is enriching and it fills your spirit.