miércoles, 5 de noviembre de 2008

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Field trip

My last field trip was in San Pedro, one month behind (ww), whit my “conservation of environment in degraded area” class and the teaches (sp) of this class (sm = is) Rodrigo Vargas.
We were (ww= went) to this place because we must know the reasons of degradation of areas and to learn how (ww =what) we can do to improve degraded areas.
We learn (t) many technologies and (p) instruments and measures of conservation of the degraded soils. We learned to do “ditches of infiltration” and “channels of desviation (sp)”, and it was something very educational because it (sm) something practical that can be useful always.
In this “terreno” I spend a very good time because I love to climb hills and be in contact with Nature.
In the night when we returned of (wp) the area of study, my classmates preparing (t) a barbecue (p) but I don’t like meat so I did not eat.
I really passed a very good time but I was a bit worried because we returned on Sunday (cl) and I was very tired and (p) on Monday I had a test of other (ww) class and I could not study.
In (wp) the beginning I don’t (t) wont (sp) to go because I don (sp) want to leave my little baby and I was very sad, but my mom call me and say (t) to me that my daughter was very good. In two weeks we have a other (sp) “terreno” and I hope (sm) learn many things and (sm) spend a very good time again.

My favourite photography

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I never liked (ww) photography´s, especially photography´s by myself because I am not very photogenic, (p) too long sentence but I have a few pictures by my family or my pets that I like. I also like pictures of landscapes or place that I have visited because (sm) bring to me many good memories. I think the pictures is (ww = plural) important because (sp) (sm) help us to remember happy moments and (p) too long sentence the life is so ephemeral that sometimes (sm = it) is good to return and rememeber (sp) good times.
Since my daughter was born I have (sm= been)a fanatic of pictures of her (wo) because I want to have all her stages of growth (sp) because baby´s (?) (Babies?) grow very fast.
Of all her photegraphy´s (sp) that more I like is

Field Trip!!! to the Huasco...

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Well, in this occasion (sm) speaking about the some Field trip. I’ve traveled (sp) a lot, because (sm= of) the different subjects of the university, for example “San Pedro de Melipilla, Cachagua, Salamanca, Putaendo, Tiltil, Valpo, Laguna Verde, Quintay, Cartagena, La Parva, Pudahuel, Pirque, Andean Piedemont, La Estrella, Rapel, and other places.

The last week with my classmates and teachers we travelled (sp) to the Huasco city and Freirina Town. (p) For the subject of Problematic of Chile 2. In this occasion we travel (t) with Enrique Aliste Teacher (wo).

We travelled (sp) to this place for studying a lot (sm) the socials problematic (?), such as the pollution by industrial activities and mining. In addition, the environments problematic (ww = problems?), the contamination in the Huasco Wetland.

Well, my work’s group was (sm = conformed by) Jaime, Frodo, Chilombiano, Jean and Peter, (p) we (sm= were) working (sm) the environments problematic (ww =problems?) in Huasco and Freirina. With Peter and Chilombiano we did a survey of the uses of land cover.

In addition we traveled (sp) with two drivers, one was Pelao (pelao’S) uncle and other uncle (sm = who) was Joke face.

In conclusion this field trip was very entertainment; we were partying and (sm =we) did a lot of roast.

Ah (p) I remember that we carry (t) bicycles for travel (f) in the city, for this reason the dolor (???????? = pain) in the ass was a pile.

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